Interesting premise, needed better execution

I enjoyed the storyline itself, but there were a few issues, one of which was with the writing. It was often difficult to tell if your character was just thinking or if she was speaking out loud because quotation marks were misplaced or left out entirely. Some of the scenes were also very confusing, with logic jumps that aren’t explained to the player or certain actions that occur that just do NOT make sense in the scene. Also, the endings of the story just seem a bit… Out of place. There was all this build up, a twist, and then there’s this sort of half resolution. It just didn’t feel satisfying in any way. Also, for a choose your on adventure game there weren’t a lot of paths to go down.

alliebeemac about Fatehaven